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Thursday, August 7, 2008

An Urge To Surge

There is something that beats inside
And its not the heart this time

Something rises and craves
Not for love and certainly not for wealth

I am starving when i have food
I feel contained and confined

To say the least, i say more
But i dont know what for

The song i sing, sounds like dirge
How shall i rime, an urge to surge?

2 comments:

YoursTruly said...

I am not gifted with words like you are, but just can say

Beautiful

True to your name "Words_Speak_Loudest".

I would compare this composition with Mona-Lisa: An enigma. Hope you get it published somewhere.

John Melvin said...

Wow Atul, u write really good :)..
This poem is good :)..
BTW even i write in spare tym..
Do check out...
http://www.johnmelvinjw.blogspot.com/